Narrative
writing
Characters:
Sydney- the teenager seeing demonic figures
Mrs Willow- the psychiatrist who gives meds to
Sydney but is also joins forces with Mrs Chapel
Mrs Chapel: works at the asylum is a demon
Grace (mother): is the innocent yet her body
is taken over
1. Sydney is in
her home in her bedroom, she gets kidnapped and gets dragged out
(fear of
being alone in a home)
Pan, tilts,
extreme close ups
2.
Visit psychiatrist - Mrs Willow
·
Pan of mis-en-scene
then onto the characters
·
Two shot mid shot
·
Over the shoulder
3.
Gives her meds to take
·
Close up of pills
dropping into hands
·
Close up of hands
to mouth taking the pills
4.
Refuses to take them
·
Stops suddenly,
close up of eyes darting left to right
·
Voices, whispers
“ they’re trying to kill you, it’s poison
·
Mid Shot of girl,
high pitch scream, camera shakes with dynamic
5.
Thinks they’re poisoned
6.
Mum tries to make her take it
·
Two shot of the
confrontation, shouting while she is screaming
·
Mother begging
her ( Mid shot)
7.
She calls up the psychiatrist , advises her to
send her to the asylum (physiatrist-demon)
·
Mid Shot, cuts
between conversation, “ I think the ____ Asylum would be best for her”
8.
Gets sent to the asylum
9.
Sydney looks under her bed then gets dragged
out of herbed
·
Birds eye shot of
her lying on the bed
·
Tracking shot of
her getting off the bed to the floor
·
Low angle point
of view pan from left to right
·
Cuts to Establishing shot of Sydney, suddenly
being dragged
10.
Sydney in the class room
·
Mid shot of her sitting down
·
Close up of
fidgeting hands , shaking leg , showing other parts of her body showing she is
agitated/troubled
·
Off the shoulder
shot as Mrs Chapel walks towards her
·
Camera slightly
tilts towards Mrs Chapel, slightly zooming in
11.
Ms chapel tries to drown Sydney in the bath
(shows brutality)
-Use of go pro, slightly fish-eyed lense
12.
Realises Mrs Chapel is a demon
13.
Sydney gets locked into her new room
·
Birds eye view of
struggle running around the room trying to get out of the room acting franticly
·
Close up’s of her
facial expressions, extreme close ups contorted face
·
Suddenly brakes
free, close up of feet touching the ground
14.
She escapes asylum
15.
Mrs Chapel and Mrs Willow are in the woods
connecting with supernatural
·
360 degree shot,
as they are being possessed by the supernatural forces
·
Close up’s of
disorientated faces and actions
16.
Sydney walks through woods or alley way and
see’s creepy people and thinks she’s going mad, then they disappear (jump scare when she turns around)
·
Behind shot,
frontal shot, as she walks
·
Close ups to
face, as she looks around
·
Mainly mid shot
as she continues to walk
·
Point of view as
she see’s people
·
Jumps scare when
she turns around
·
Go pro as she
run’s panning area
·
Long shot of her
running
17.
Sydney running away
18.
Train station, she sees dark figure (sees
figure staring directly at her, train leaving station, train passes person
disappears
19.
Running through tunnel (Greenwich foot tunnel)
20.
Sydney returns home and mum opens the door and
lets her in, she turns around and realises her foster mum is a demon
·
Mid shot of her
banging frantically on the door
·
Pans to her
almost falling in as it easily opens
·
Suddenly
scrambles to get up scared, tracking shot Upwards
·
Point of view
looking around
·
Mid shot of
her backing away from the door and
stopping
·
Demon foster mum
grabs her around mouth
21.
Ends : ‘The ones you love, the ones closest to
you are the ones you should be afraid of!'
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