Scripting

Scripting

(Sydney is in her room as commotion is happening downstairs. Sydney is listening to music the audience doesn't hear it; the mum is screaming and there is a close up of the door knob) Sydney gets dragged out

Sydney: (screams)

Narrator: there is that one thing that affects you forever! Taking a small piece each time1

Location change: small intimate room with; enter: Sydney, Mrs G Jackson and Mrs Willow

Mrs G Jackson: (Hysterically, weary tone of voice) I just don’t know what happened to her I just don’t know what wrong with her

Physiatrist: take these, this will settle you.. (Gives them to Sydney, Sydney takes them in front of Mrs Willow)

Location change: Back to house

-Pills are in Sydney’s hand slowly brings them to her mouth, commence voices!

Voices in Sydney’s head: ‘they’re trying to kill you’ Dont let them control you!’

Sydney: screams

Sydney: (throws starts to throw pills down the toilet)

Mrs G Jackson enters sees Sydney throwing them down the toilet. Squabble as foster mum tries to force her to take them)

Mrs Jackson outside of Sydney’s room on the phone (looks stiff and creepy, very straight faced)

(Mrs Jackson makes a noise and Sydney creepily turns around)

Mrs Jackson: (on the phone) I can’t care for her anymore, she doesn’t take them, she doesn’t listen ( crying on the phone)

Physiatrist: Well Mrs Jackson, there is a place where she can go. The Willows will take very good care of her.

Location change:...

Mrs Willow & Chapel are looking through the window

Sydney is looking at the asylum

Mrs Chapel : ‘Lights out’

Gets settled in to her room, laying in bed, looks under bed and gets dragged under the bed. Worm eye view of the demon hovering over Sydney on the floor. Long shot

Location Change : humanities or Enterprise hall

Shot of all of them coming into the class

Sydney is the last one in

Student: I’ve heard bad things about her, don’t trust her!

Sydney: why!?

(Both Walk in, student briskly walks off and sits down, Sydney slowly walks in Confused)

Mrs Chapel: Why are you late?

All Kids: ‘GOOD MORNING MRS CHAPEL!’

Syndey starts playing with her fingers

Pan shot Mrs Chapel changes into a demon and Sydney screams. That unsettles everyone in the room. Everyone starts acting crazy.

(Mrs Chapel punishes Syndey,Drowns Sydney in the bath Diagetic sounds: splashing, Gasping for breath , banging)

Stops drowning, Mrs Chapel lets go , Syndey turns around at the far end of the bathroom , Mrs Chapel is in her demon form. Sydney runs to her bedroom Mrs chapel looks her in her bedroom

Syndey struggles in the bedroom trying to get out, commence voices and people. Demons in the room

Sydney escapes asylum using a hair pin left in her hair

Location change: Woods

Mrs Chapel & willow are in the woods evoking all their powers 

Sydney’s walks through woods or alley way and see creepy people dotted on either side they disappear. ( jump scare )

Sydney runs away

Train station, she sees dark figure (sees figure staring directly at her, train leaving station, train passes person disappears

Running through tunnel (Greenwich foot tunnel)

Sydney returns home and mum opens the door and lets her in, she turns around and realises her foster mum is a demon

Mid shot of her banging frantically on the door

Pans to her almost falling in as it easily opens

Suddenly scrambles to get up scared, tracking shot Upwards

Point of view looking around 

Mid shot of her  backing away from the door and stopping

Demon foster mum grabs her around mouth

Ends : ‘The ones you love, the ones closest to you are the ones you should be afraid of!'